Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Welcome To My World.]

lol at openin

ok so im stoked on the same intro sample cuz i think it sounds tight. sorry for the low score...im listeining to this trac on a lap top at the moment so i cant really hear the bass but ill let you know whats up on everything else. ok so its a nice intro but some stuff needs to be switched. the pad with the vocals 0:44-1:35 needs to start the trac out.(the vocals are a lil weird and seem out of order to here). then 1:36-1:50 needs to give a lil taste of the melody before you show it off all the way. drop the beat 0:17-0:45 (with the cool little cut vocals right off the bat). then go full on with your melody. im not guna tell you what to do from there becuase i cant tell you everything but that should start you off better in my opinion. ok so i just noticed this is a dance track but it sounds like a trance track. your clap sucks so that definitely needs to change and your lead synth needs to be a lil more pluck style cuz its way to trancy. hope that helps see ya around

Redleif responds:

thanks for that. ill be sure to pass it on.

:D

[Auecs-Intermission]

intresting

not really my kinda stuff but i really like where the song goes at 2:58. the outro after the vocals is fucking awesome. that whale synth is bad ass

Auecs responds:

Hey man thank you for the review! This is not my kind of thing either. However, I HAD to try something different this time. You know what I mean... However, you're the man for writing a review! thanks so much!

[Devotion (NuroGL Remix)]

wow

this track is fucking ballin

Teck071 responds:

ha -

[DXM - STRP Preview]

damn

i rember listening to one of your songs awhile back and it fucking blew. this is some really unique DnB. that shit you do with the pitch of the percusion is wild. pretty sick dude good work

tijnn responds:

Thanks man ;d

[Fredgy - Dance to the Rhythm]

meh

melody sux kinda random and doesnt sound good

Fredgy responds:

first of all, the melody isn't random.. lol ? and it doesn't sux either...
second, it hasn't mastered or something, ok, but it doesn't sux..
and because it hasn't been mastered yet, it could be sounding not that waw, but it sounds good already lol ..
first person who says that = YOU lol :p
i've heard much from great artists or just friends .. that it is good, but needs mastering or something..
anyway.. thanks for 7

["Out Of Reach Preview"]

lead synth

lead synt sucks and your off bass is pretty bad too. maybe muffle the lead synth or get some more unison on it cuz its to dry and boring

momboom1 responds:

Check out the full version, [Out Of Reach]..

[Morning Sunshine]

needs bass

this song needs a better bass line

Anima-Theory responds:

how?

[~K4P~ 07 - Spirit Rain]

needs work

you got a good melody but your percusion sucks pretty bad. this song needs some better build ups and some drops. quality work tho

Musical-Memoirs responds:

when i made this it was all i could at build ups and drops
not that i got much better since... i still never have really taken the time to make this song (none of them excually) fully finished...
so indeed it lacks some things...
and that percusion thing... well i think i got to go to youtube again to check it out what that is... cause i have no idea what you mean :P

[!/What I Found\!(Solid Remix)]

umm

this song kinda sucks. the beats pretty lame and the lyrics are even worse. good eq tho

Blizzaine responds:

Thank you very much kind sir.
[:

[Blue Dance V2]

hmmm

pretty sick

syphonmax responds:

Glad you like one xD