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[~EnV~Bestammelse(Full)]

really

start a track with the metrenome super gay. hi hat sucks in this track and lead synth would be cool if you staccatoed it more when you do all the cutoff tweaking

Envy responds:

I stopped listening at "hi hat sucks"

u jelly

[The Way of 8-Bit (W I P) FIX]

lacking

theres no percusion

djresset responds:

that is the meaning

if i have that it ruins the song

[Streamline Remix - ERA]

ehh

kick sucks

ERAmatica responds:

Well after listening to some of your songs I would have to conclude that you have no right criticizing anyone elses work. Your songs are not put together well and just all around suck. Go fuck yourself.

Thanks,

-The ERA

P.S. I noticed that you commented on other peoples songs too. You are obviously a troll. Get a life.

[Loss for words]

terrible

so this basically sounds like all the low produced shitty little kid music on NG. kick is super gay just ur generic kick that comes from someone who doesnt know where to find a good kick. melody is good awful and the synth that makes you sound sooooo "original" is shitty like a whinny bitch like you just like all the shitty original 9 year olds on ng. no percussion of cousre lol because you cant cuz you are fucking stupid. just everything about this track says im a moron that cant make music. i would rather listen to radio comercials than this

Treysen responds:

Lol good awful? Maybe you should have gone to college (or did you not get accepted? That is probably more likely.) And yeah this was almost a year old, back with the old version of FL I had (before I bought it, with money ;p) and wow, the mastering on this SUCKS lol. ((And so does that vibrant preset, pew))

[Feel the Power (Hardstyle)]

lol dont vote

pretty good for ng not guna lie. actually this damn legit hardstyle. great build ups you sound like you play shows.

DJT3chnic responds:

Really appreciate the feedback. And i wish i played shows, hehe.

[Baby Doll (Basshunter LOL)]

vocals need fx

need a better kick... kick doesnt go with the bass line synth. verygood ideas here but id say your vocals need some reverb fx or maybe even a lil delay. id mess with that to give it some more energy

liberatingpulse responds:

Yes, I do agree with this statement. I'll probably start uploading my better stuff to newgrounds in the coming months. :) Thanks for the review!

[Dance Forever (JK)]

lol

where did god come from hahahahaha(didnt vote for on this track vocals are kiiiiinnnda bad)

bob6294 responds:

...Man I love constructive criticism. Sorry if I can't sing...

[Mysane]

not so great

just so ya know i 5'vd it cuz you checked out my stuff. but ill give you some honest producer to producer critisism the progression or chord change whatever you wana call it is pretty bad and you play it straight threw the whole song. sounds like you just had percussion arp and just went with the wind. not a lot of thought put into thetrack. i know it trance but yea just need some change. percussion could use some work. if you use fl id throw that kick through the comprssor set to drums. and um maybe cut the cymbal s out once in awhil.....i could keep goin but main thing i would say is the chord proggression just not very pleassing to listen to over and over and over aaaaaannnnd over gl in the future and thx for the good review on my last track : )

Adjeye responds:

As long as you give a good reason for not liking it. I do like your tracks, I don't care you don't love mine.

[Fredgy - Seeker WIP]

kick

k.... yea you need to get some vengence samples....cuz that kick is wack and your clap or 2 and 4 is weak as fuck. synth choice is better on this track. but the melody is a lil much for me. just some better drum sounds would make this track a lot better. the hi hat is pretty tired. to get a nice crisp hi hat sound i use a crash and cut its sound so you get that intense crisp sound. also throwing the percussion threw the compressor(set to drums....that is if you use FL) will make your stuff sound cleaner

Fredgy responds:

i got that all, just didn't want to use it x)
but ok, i'll use it all again by my next track :p
oh ok, nice to know about that crash ! i'll see what i can do ^^

[Fredgy - Eurodancer {Remix}]

hmmmm

you got ok transitions. but you need new synth sounds cuz the ones you got are really cheesey. like at :50 i was like oh god this kid needs nexus. hahaha good piano tho

Fredgy responds:

thanks for review :)
i know about the synths, i got all that vsti's also
i just wanted to make my own synths without all that outstanding vsti's :p
thanks for review though ;)