Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Office Theme Remix]

hahaha

what the hell made u want to remake that song. hhaha fucking gooffy. as to the guy who said this doesnt sound like the actual song, it s sounds exadtly like it.

ZenMicroClock responds:

My sister had just gotten me all the seasons of the office and I was watching them constantly. So naturally I had the theme song stuck in my head and I wanted to figure it out, so I did.

[{CW} Abyss {Remastered Final}]

HAHAHAHA

zero bombers lol. I feel ur pain bro. I say this track needs a harder KICK....eh. Cool synths. Like me and everyone else percusion is lacking. Damn sick melody at 3 mins!!!!! This track needs more bass in my opinion. Needs some more space filled with a nice thick bass line. If this is Fl throw that Bass line threw Multicompresion set to bass booster. cool stuff bro.

CrimzonWolf777 responds:

I was hearing this on my surround sound and heard the same problems you heard. damn but now that means I gotta edit this with a different remastered version of this song lol. but i'm gettin right on that as i'm typing this. so plz bear with me. ^_^v

[DJ S - Journey 1]

cool stuff

reverb claps . if this is done with FL throw ur kick threw the Compresor(set to drums). over all make stuff more reverbed. its trance baby.

Sanryd responds:

agh, i'm such a noob... lol. Thanks for the advice... definitely gunna do better. Tell me what u think of my new song the robot.

[Pumping Pulse]

pretty good

for workin on in one night. seems like its missing a bass line. i'd boost the bass line up a bit or throw it through a filter or compressor orsomething.

Dj-Rippa responds:

thanks for your advice! :)

[Rig - Dancing AND-DROID]

hahaha lol

way off beat??? hahaha. its a cool little beat. nice work.

Rig responds:

lol thx

[Loss of words [Nitro3600]]

unique

yea definitely never heard anything like this on NG. Good sounds . A little slow for my standards. Sounds like a hip hop beat more than dance. Any way good stuff good stuff.

Nitro3600 responds:

Thanks alot Mr-green-apple

[Sotsugyou - Piano]

nice

yeah id like to get a hold of this if its FL. I could definitely make a wicked Hard Dance track out of this. Not a big fan of the inuyasha series cuz inuyasha is bitch wiped. Anyway this piano track you got is very nice. Very talented very talented.

studio-nightbird responds:

hehe. i would love to give you the music sheet but i just can't read them and if i can't read them i can't write them :P.

thanks for the comment

~studionightbird~

[<Ca> dreary dreams (demo)]

Needs more percusion

Maybe a reverbed crash at 19 secs. definitely 2 and 4 snare when the synth comes in. Has lots of potentioal.

ColbyArmstrong responds:

Thanks For The Feedback

[The Perfect Breeze]

Dance??

ok im guna help you get some inspiration for your tracks. you can find ATB at about anyy music store that calls itself a music store. If you want to here some good Hard Dance look for SCARF!, United Beats, Tune up!, Party Pimpz, Rocco, DJ Dean, Cascada. iTunes radio (electronic) is a GREAT place to look for electronic music. Hope this helps.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Oh ok, thanks, but I don't find inspiration by just listening to one genre of music, I find it by listening to others. And I didn't mean to clasify this as dance, it was meant to be miscellaneous. Sorry to disappoint. But thanks for the comment, I greatly appreciate it.

[.:Heart Felt Keys:. (DONE)]

could use some work

not enough techno sounds to really classify it ass techno. your initial beat is a lil wack in my opinion. Most everything in this isnt really all that intresting. its kinda the same shit over and over. One thing you didnt do horribly is pick ridiculous sounds. Id put some reverb on that piano in the master. Change the kick once in awhile( or make it simpler). Maybe work on some better melodies to. GL on the rest of your work...it takes some time.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Thank thanks, I needed some constructivre criticism. But I wasn't really aiming for 'hard' techo. It's 'heart felt keys' not 'death techno keys' lol. But I understand where you're coming from. I appreciate it.