Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<Ca> dreary dreams (demo)]

Needs more percusion

Maybe a reverbed crash at 19 secs. definitely 2 and 4 snare when the synth comes in. Has lots of potentioal.

ColbyArmstrong responds:

Thanks For The Feedback

[The Perfect Breeze]

Dance??

ok im guna help you get some inspiration for your tracks. you can find ATB at about anyy music store that calls itself a music store. If you want to here some good Hard Dance look for SCARF!, United Beats, Tune up!, Party Pimpz, Rocco, DJ Dean, Cascada. iTunes radio (electronic) is a GREAT place to look for electronic music. Hope this helps.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Oh ok, thanks, but I don't find inspiration by just listening to one genre of music, I find it by listening to others. And I didn't mean to clasify this as dance, it was meant to be miscellaneous. Sorry to disappoint. But thanks for the comment, I greatly appreciate it.

[.:Heart Felt Keys:. (DONE)]

could use some work

not enough techno sounds to really classify it ass techno. your initial beat is a lil wack in my opinion. Most everything in this isnt really all that intresting. its kinda the same shit over and over. One thing you didnt do horribly is pick ridiculous sounds. Id put some reverb on that piano in the master. Change the kick once in awhile( or make it simpler). Maybe work on some better melodies to. GL on the rest of your work...it takes some time.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Thank thanks, I needed some constructivre criticism. But I wasn't really aiming for 'hard' techo. It's 'heart felt keys' not 'death techno keys' lol. But I understand where you're coming from. I appreciate it.

[Neon Grassland]

intresting

well i got your message.... and im bakc. This is a niffty little sound byte. Not really a song but maturely done. you've definitely made some improvement since i last was in your audio section.

Triented responds:

Wow man thanks alot I just started again :).

[Some Feeling [FIXED]]

im diggin

yea i agree with your profile thing. there is not a lot of good artist in the audio portal. This track is pretty sick. the synths you have are good but but i think think they need a little more distortion or reverb. you are definitely good.

DJ-SkiLLz responds:

thanks man!

[Techno 541]

not so good

umm id put that rave synth that you used throw some X-Y controllers and change the sound of it because it is way to lame and boring to be the same for like 40 measures. the percussion is not intresting at all. the progression is ok but the melody is weak as hell.

ZanyTaco responds:

Yeah i just learned how to use x-y controllers like a couple weeks ago, and i think i'm getting better at drums thx for reviewing tho

[Silent-G - Wake Up]

distored to hell

the quality of this track ruins it. the mastering if there is even any mastering on this is god awful. can you hear that distortion???? thats bad.

Silent-G responds:

yeah, I know.

[[DPS] - Soundless War]

eh

the bass line could have progressed more.

Dj-Powerstorm responds:

agreed

[Back to the Basic]

bond

yea this is probably the bond music were he's sneakin around and shit. the sounds are bad. the percussion is to far in the background. mixing is not verry good.

Bunny-master responds:

Sorry you feel that way. This was an old song, and nowhere near perfect...so I guess I agree :D

[warped beatation]

good beats

this is a little more DnBish but whatever. the beats are good but the sounds you add later didnt really add to the track in my opinion. its ok.

sajo1 responds:

Dear Mr Green-Apple, thanks for the review. WOOT! my apple is blue home slice