Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Majora's Mask - Last Hours]

hey

like what you did in with the clap. Dont really like the change you made in the progression in the beggining. when kick starts up need to add a two and for clap or snare after like 16 bars. decent progression once it gets goin. do like your bass choice but your trance gate kinda lame. would definitely just make it like a straight pad of not gate it. maybe more delay or i dunno trance to me needs a lot of delay and reverb to give it a big powerful spacey feel. definitely got potential just gotta make more stuff, and the voting system fucked just reupload if you want people to hear

gavkay21 responds:

Thanks for the review I am going to play around with it until i get it perfect. It has potential to be awesome.

[xKore - jpop remixu]

pro

SAVAGE wish i could make this stuff super hard

[Adjeye-3 ~ I need to be l]

hey

dont really like the opening arp... kinda ametuer. i dunno could be good for like some gothic music but yea not a big fan of that genre. do like ur snare nice and snappy and clean. definitley could drop some shit out to give it more of a less is more sound and make your build ups more powerful. yea just all through out your trance gate sounds just not great to listen too. sorry if i like crush you just bein honest. needs some more like trance saw action like distortion maybe ill make a track to show you what i mean. yea got potential just takes time....lots of time

Adjeye responds:

ok.. But you know I AM a amateur? I am just 14... so.. And, please keep reviewing me ok?

[System Split - F-777]

need better synths

percusion and bass line good but the synths are just corny as all hell

F-777 responds:

Hehe thanks man and yes i agree. I like em though =).

[[Far Away]]

cheesy

lead synth cheesy and lame. percussion sucks sooo bad track definely needs work

Harbour responds:

Thanks for your feedback!

I realize how bad this song is, now, y'know like 2 years later.

(This song was posted in 2009 and was my first song)

[Nu Rho Zeta]

agreed

lead synth is awful

[ozmium - Did i stutter?]

annoying

plain and simple

xozmiumx responds:

coming from the person who's newest submissions cant even get above a two in rating.........

[Friends Forever Mix]

hmmmm

good vocals terrible mixing

[Blargh (LSDJ)]

doesnt belong here

this not a dance track

RoccoW responds:

I accidentally filed this under "Dance", not knowing how I could change it to "Video game", as the Newgrounds noob that I am. Indeed, belongs under Video Game, but because it is featured in Disco Rampage, I can't change it