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[Sought Freedom]

huuhhh

this track went nowhere. it was the same kinda backround arp stuff over and over and over again. there definitely needs to be a change in bass progression. the percussions alright but thats about it.

[Strong Sonata]

classical haha

yea techno is definitely a very melodical type of music. the sounds are ok on this but it doesnt really do ur artist any justice. if i were to do a classical track i would proabably just use a grand piano and reverb the hell out of it. the percussion is so lame on this. you gotta use the 2 and 4 man. 2 and 4...! thats how all techno remixes go. you can pick up any song and speed it up and put 2 and 4 on it and you got ur self techno.

[techno metal]

hahaha

dude you need to work on putting your loops together lmao. the sounds are really dry on this. it sounds like you didnt mess with any knobs. you can't just throw things on the loop list and not tweak it. if you did tweak things its not workin. this track could use some work.

[Call of the Wild]

not feelin it

the sounds and everything are great, but your melody is just not that great to be played over and over and over and over and over again. the mixing is good. i would make an 8 bar lick and then another 16 bar lick like you got here. that would give you more to mix with.

Envy responds:

Yeah, most of my songs now are 80% effects and mixing XD. I will admit this isnt one of my best, but i was trying something new!

BTW I may not be submitting anything for a little bit, cause im working on making Raves... But dont tell anyone!
I guess you could say I'm training in my Dojo to become a better artist.

[I think I]

yeeee

the sounds are really really weak. the beat is way to basic. you threw in a very familar lick from a song that i dont know the name of. If you're guna do that at least capitalize on it. the bass is boringggg zzZZZzzzZZZzz. all in all this track is weak.

[Sort of 80's beat?]

benassi

this sounds like ur aiming for the nasty benassi sound. listen to some of that shit and copy it. this bass line is not good. the percussion is also lame too. trust me listen to benassi and play with his shit. you will learn how to play a bouncy bass line and then be able to make your own style.

[Psychotic Transmission]

definitely need more

yea you should have worked on this more. the sounds are pretty good especially that filterd piano whatever but the track went nowhere. no melody no bass line. : (

[Drakkins UnderLine]

yea

this is a damn good first submission to ng. i'd turn up the leads on this tho. percussions alright. sounds are decent. bass line is there. good ideas here.

Drakkin responds:

thanks, and actually the leads were louder when I made it, but for some reason it almost seemed like when I converted it to 128kbps, for filesize purposes, the leads got put into the background for some reason.. it happened again with a smaller WIP I have when I converted it as well.. sounded fine in editing and in 193kbps

[Onyxz]

awww

its nice to see a female artist on ng. Suprisingly you have some pretty hard industrial sounds on here. im not really feelin this track tho. the percussion sounds arent that great. this doesnt flow very well from one part to the next. the melody isnt really all there. when i think of techno every track has that 16 bar lick that just makes you bounce inside. no bass line really either. better luck next time.

KittenLoveX responds:

thanks for review