Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ridian - Eviscerate]

pretty boring

pretty long build up that wasnt good for a very boring melody. the bass line could use a progression that goes with your lead synth. percussions ok. this track could use some work.

[Emotion Crash]

eh

that one lick goes on for way tooo long. sounds aren't all that great. god that lick needs to be taken out once in awhile. its not that good.

[Peacemaker-Fail]

needs more

you got some decent sounds here but not enough to mix to. this could definitely use at least two or three more melody lines.

[Forsaken (DEMO)]

bad mixing

a lot of things coming in and out that don't really go together. my suggestion would to be fade things in and out gradually and make this a little longer.

[Space Trip]

mediocore

nothing really intresting in this track. pretty basic beat with nothing really goin on.

[[The bridge g-R]]

pretty good

the mixing is alright and the sounds are great. not feelin the melody that much tho.

g-r4ve responds:

hmm I liked the melody lol

[Red7 - Coniferous Blizzard]

rad

yea dude this is a cool little track. the sounds are great. one thing i would do to this track is maybe make a break in the song and change the bass line up a bit. you change the melody up but its the same duh uh duh uh duh uh. let the bass line have a chance to shine.

Redse7en responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed this song of mine! I fully understand what you mean and will keep it in mind while I work on my next projects. I just want to say thanks for pointing this out because the more people critique me the more I can build with my music.

~RedSe7en

[Phellow]

its alright

you got some good sounds in here but then you got some bad ones too. i would take some stuff out of this track. just keep the synth that you use in the intro and take all the other synths out(maybe leave like one other). the percussion could be a little more the some through out. I'd say the biggest problem with this track is that there is too much change that isnt good. stick to the intro and sounds and branch off that progression.

[Trance of Doom]

not that impressed

you have good sounds but its like the some dit ah did dit ah did dit ah did. you use like two pitchs and the song goes no where. the mixing is good but like i said this track doesnt go anywhere.

Twistedtechnology responds:

Lol fair enough. Its true, the song really doesnt go anywhere, and im surprised really that people still like it. Now a days i try to change my stuff up a good bit.

Thanks for leavin an honest review....its hard to find those these days..
XD

~Twistedtechnology

[Twisted Mind - speed]

progressions

bass needs to be compressed. it gets distorted. the progressions you have aren't that great and the sounds dont help. you have somethin goin on about your 3rd change in, in the song but the sounds are just really washed out and not pleasing. listen to some Tune Up!, Pulesdriver, ATB, and basslovers united. they all have great techno sounds and the best licks ever.