Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[NH22 - Alternate Dimension]

whoa

i'd slow this down. this isn't really my style tho. i think when you shred all over the place your brain really cant handle it. you have good progressions and good licks but they're just too damn fast. the sounds are alright. i don't like bend synth or whatever. its just too goofy.

[Scream Pulse: CD intro]

ok

the percussion is right on but ur other sounds are just lame. the melody isnt really intresting either.

[DJ-Mann - The End]

meh

the intro is way to long for the weak beat and melody. nothing particularly intresting about this track. the sounds picked out are ok but this is just not something id want to listen to while im drivin around in my car.

[Thanks.]

bass

you need a bass line. the intro is too long. the beat is kind of lame.

[TAA--Pyro!]

its alright

i would say you need some drum fills in this track. overall its kind of weak. the reeverb is alright but ur melodies and stuff just aren't all that great. the breaks are also very boring. one thing i did like was the piano u use. the intro is good but the rest of the track didnt go anywhere.

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Personally, I was proud of my drum work, but I'll take your opinion into consideration.

[Spaceboy Rave]

eek

your age just screams out in this one...particularly in the percusion. its not good/catchy at all. we might have to ideas of techno. sorry man. this could use some base lines, 2 & 4, organization, better mixing, and maybe a consistent melody.

Triented responds:

Oh and on the last review, it isn't a video game track, its a music story...

[Searching for the spacboy]

ummmm

i think a lot of the younger artist on NG are lacking in the melody department of making music. This sounds like you just improvised all your loops and was like ok that'll do. i think you should listen to stuff like Tune Up, or ATB and maybe you could steal some shit from them. If your guna make a video game track put it in the video game genre.

Triented responds:

Nope i don't use .wav .mp3 or any file for my music.
I don't even use fruity loops.
cuz it's gay. I use buzz, you have a master synth and you create a new synth and connect it either through an effect to the master or straight through the master, then you can either choose a preset and be lazy, or customize the damn synth for yourself.
:P
Thanks for the review....

[Looped action theme]

not diggin it

i can stand some loops that are simple, but this is just really generic. im not feelin this one at all.

Triented responds:

Wow i can't belive im still getting review of my third ever song! :O

[Battle of the Spaceboy]

meh

i'm not really into this kinda stuff. i feel like im on a sugar high or somethin. the beat is just goofy. the melody is too much. its better than most stuff on NG ill admit that.

Triented responds:

Im diabetic :)

[Brain Fluid (Demo)]

sick shit

i can tell you live in your FL, it shows immensely. sick track.