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[Elements - Fruity Lopez Remix]

nice

begining is a little long, and the build up built to just a piano. I would only use one build up then go into the song around 1:10. Great sounds and awesome melody. This could become a gold track ez. maybe add one more 16 bar melody and your set to go.

[<Ca> dreary dreams (demo)]

Needs more percusion

Maybe a reverbed crash at 19 secs. definitely 2 and 4 snare when the synth comes in. Has lots of potentioal.

ColbyArmstrong responds:

Thanks For The Feedback

[Bitch, Im Back ~187~]

HAHAHA

have you ever heard of Lenord the Great. Thats some hard ass shit haha.

[Raver Fantasy (FL Mix)]

ZOMG

TUNE UP!!!! You did a pretty good job. I was expecting you to ruin the track but this definitely does it justice. I would like to see this if its FL because theses synths are like the same ones tune up uses. PLZ msg me

[Fruity Lopez - Summer Rain]

Damn

im not really a happy hardcor guy but you know your shit. Your build ups need a lil more somethin. feels a little empty. Good track. AWESOME

[Rapid by snowbuddy0]

cool stuff

this would make a sick ass DnB track. Somethin i would change in this is maybe change chords. It kinda the same stuff over and over. Id like to make this into a DnB track. Messege me and we will trade E-mails.

[The Perfect Breeze]

Dance??

ok im guna help you get some inspiration for your tracks. you can find ATB at about anyy music store that calls itself a music store. If you want to here some good Hard Dance look for SCARF!, United Beats, Tune up!, Party Pimpz, Rocco, DJ Dean, Cascada. iTunes radio (electronic) is a GREAT place to look for electronic music. Hope this helps.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Oh ok, thanks, but I don't find inspiration by just listening to one genre of music, I find it by listening to others. And I didn't mean to clasify this as dance, it was meant to be miscellaneous. Sorry to disappoint. But thanks for the comment, I greatly appreciate it.

[.:Heart Felt Keys:. (DONE)]

could use some work

not enough techno sounds to really classify it ass techno. your initial beat is a lil wack in my opinion. Most everything in this isnt really all that intresting. its kinda the same shit over and over. One thing you didnt do horribly is pick ridiculous sounds. Id put some reverb on that piano in the master. Change the kick once in awhile( or make it simpler). Maybe work on some better melodies to. GL on the rest of your work...it takes some time.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Thank thanks, I needed some constructivre criticism. But I wasn't really aiming for 'hard' techo. It's 'heart felt keys' not 'death techno keys' lol. But I understand where you're coming from. I appreciate it.

[Oxygen (Trance Mix)]

its okay

for a weeks worth of work the melody is pretty week. bass line delivers but there is no real melody that stands out. its kinda like back up singers sang the whole song and no lead singers decided to show up. your mastering is great though. props to that.

[TTN - Dust In Space]

build ups

this screams for build ups. Crashes crashes crashes crashes snares snares snares. good attempt.