rad
yea dude this is a cool little track. the sounds are great. one thing i would do to this track is maybe make a break in the song and change the bass line up a bit. you change the melody up but its the same duh uh duh uh duh uh. let the bass line have a chance to shine.
I'm glad you enjoyed this song of mine! I fully understand what you mean and will keep it in mind while I work on my next projects. I just want to say thanks for pointing this out because the more people critique me the more I can build with my music.
~RedSe7en
its alright
you got some good sounds in here but then you got some bad ones too. i would take some stuff out of this track. just keep the synth that you use in the intro and take all the other synths out(maybe leave like one other). the percussion could be a little more the some through out. I'd say the biggest problem with this track is that there is too much change that isnt good. stick to the intro and sounds and branch off that progression.
not that impressed
you have good sounds but its like the some dit ah did dit ah did dit ah did. you use like two pitchs and the song goes no where. the mixing is good but like i said this track doesnt go anywhere.
Lol fair enough. Its true, the song really doesnt go anywhere, and im surprised really that people still like it. Now a days i try to change my stuff up a good bit.
Thanks for leavin an honest review....its hard to find those these days..
XD
~Twistedtechnology
progressions
bass needs to be compressed. it gets distorted. the progressions you have aren't that great and the sounds dont help. you have somethin goin on about your 3rd change in, in the song but the sounds are just really washed out and not pleasing. listen to some Tune Up!, Pulesdriver, ATB, and basslovers united. they all have great techno sounds and the best licks ever.
huuhhh
this track went nowhere. it was the same kinda backround arp stuff over and over and over again. there definitely needs to be a change in bass progression. the percussions alright but thats about it.
classical haha
yea techno is definitely a very melodical type of music. the sounds are ok on this but it doesnt really do ur artist any justice. if i were to do a classical track i would proabably just use a grand piano and reverb the hell out of it. the percussion is so lame on this. you gotta use the 2 and 4 man. 2 and 4...! thats how all techno remixes go. you can pick up any song and speed it up and put 2 and 4 on it and you got ur self techno.
hahaha
dude you need to work on putting your loops together lmao. the sounds are really dry on this. it sounds like you didnt mess with any knobs. you can't just throw things on the loop list and not tweak it. if you did tweak things its not workin. this track could use some work.
not feelin it
the sounds and everything are great, but your melody is just not that great to be played over and over and over and over and over again. the mixing is good. i would make an 8 bar lick and then another 16 bar lick like you got here. that would give you more to mix with.
Yeah, most of my songs now are 80% effects and mixing XD. I will admit this isnt one of my best, but i was trying something new!
BTW I may not be submitting anything for a little bit, cause im working on making Raves... But dont tell anyone!
I guess you could say I'm training in my Dojo to become a better artist.
yeeee
the sounds are really really weak. the beat is way to basic. you threw in a very familar lick from a song that i dont know the name of. If you're guna do that at least capitalize on it. the bass is boringggg zzZZZzzzZZZzz. all in all this track is weak.
benassi
this sounds like ur aiming for the nasty benassi sound. listen to some of that shit and copy it. this bass line is not good. the percussion is also lame too. trust me listen to benassi and play with his shit. you will learn how to play a bouncy bass line and then be able to make your own style.
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