Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[.:Losing Control:.]

too much

there is too much going on in this track. the sounds you picked out arent all that great. there is hardly any percussion. when i think of F-zero i think of that kick ass 16 bars of melody goodness. this did not have it at all.

Hazard-Productions responds:

you know, now that I think about it, you're right...
*siiigh*

[Psychotic Transmission]

definitely need more

yea you should have worked on this more. the sounds are pretty good especially that filterd piano whatever but the track went nowhere. no melody no bass line. : (

[Drakkins UnderLine]

yea

this is a damn good first submission to ng. i'd turn up the leads on this tho. percussions alright. sounds are decent. bass line is there. good ideas here.

Drakkin responds:

thanks, and actually the leads were louder when I made it, but for some reason it almost seemed like when I converted it to 128kbps, for filesize purposes, the leads got put into the background for some reason.. it happened again with a smaller WIP I have when I converted it as well.. sounded fine in editing and in 193kbps

[Onyxz]

awww

its nice to see a female artist on ng. Suprisingly you have some pretty hard industrial sounds on here. im not really feelin this track tho. the percussion sounds arent that great. this doesnt flow very well from one part to the next. the melody isnt really all there. when i think of techno every track has that 16 bar lick that just makes you bounce inside. no bass line really either. better luck next time.

KittenLoveX responds:

thanks for review

[NH22 - Alternate Dimension]

whoa

i'd slow this down. this isn't really my style tho. i think when you shred all over the place your brain really cant handle it. you have good progressions and good licks but they're just too damn fast. the sounds are alright. i don't like bend synth or whatever. its just too goofy.

[Scream Pulse: CD intro]

ok

the percussion is right on but ur other sounds are just lame. the melody isnt really intresting either.

[DJ-Mann - The End]

meh

the intro is way to long for the weak beat and melody. nothing particularly intresting about this track. the sounds picked out are ok but this is just not something id want to listen to while im drivin around in my car.

[Thanks.]

bass

you need a bass line. the intro is too long. the beat is kind of lame.

[TAA--Pyro!]

its alright

i would say you need some drum fills in this track. overall its kind of weak. the reeverb is alright but ur melodies and stuff just aren't all that great. the breaks are also very boring. one thing i did like was the piano u use. the intro is good but the rest of the track didnt go anywhere.

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Personally, I was proud of my drum work, but I'll take your opinion into consideration.

[Spaceboy Rave]

eek

your age just screams out in this one...particularly in the percusion. its not good/catchy at all. we might have to ideas of techno. sorry man. this could use some base lines, 2 & 4, organization, better mixing, and maybe a consistent melody.

Triented responds:

Oh and on the last review, it isn't a video game track, its a music story...