Mr-green-apple's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(= Techno vs Dance FIGHT )=]

uggg

a lot of sruff that doesnt go together. to many sounds and beats.

BritZombie responds:

Yes it is. Your lying

[mawkeetus- Jungle Beat]

eeeh

sounds like a 3rd grade music recidal. these are some really lame sounds.

BMC-Audio responds:

hey asshole, way to be a hipocrite. your music sucks balls. and i actually have a new page. this was my first like three submitions. way to welcome the new music makers into ng. you give newrounds a bad name.

[[The bridge g-R]]

pretty good

the mixing is alright and the sounds are great. not feelin the melody that much tho.

g-r4ve responds:

hmm I liked the melody lol

[Red7 - Coniferous Blizzard]

rad

yea dude this is a cool little track. the sounds are great. one thing i would do to this track is maybe make a break in the song and change the bass line up a bit. you change the melody up but its the same duh uh duh uh duh uh. let the bass line have a chance to shine.

Redse7en responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed this song of mine! I fully understand what you mean and will keep it in mind while I work on my next projects. I just want to say thanks for pointing this out because the more people critique me the more I can build with my music.

~RedSe7en

[Trance of Doom]

not that impressed

you have good sounds but its like the some dit ah did dit ah did dit ah did. you use like two pitchs and the song goes no where. the mixing is good but like i said this track doesnt go anywhere.

Twistedtechnology responds:

Lol fair enough. Its true, the song really doesnt go anywhere, and im surprised really that people still like it. Now a days i try to change my stuff up a good bit.

Thanks for leavin an honest review....its hard to find those these days..
XD

~Twistedtechnology

[Call of the Wild]

not feelin it

the sounds and everything are great, but your melody is just not that great to be played over and over and over and over and over again. the mixing is good. i would make an 8 bar lick and then another 16 bar lick like you got here. that would give you more to mix with.

Envy responds:

Yeah, most of my songs now are 80% effects and mixing XD. I will admit this isnt one of my best, but i was trying something new!

BTW I may not be submitting anything for a little bit, cause im working on making Raves... But dont tell anyone!
I guess you could say I'm training in my Dojo to become a better artist.

[.:Losing Control:.]

too much

there is too much going on in this track. the sounds you picked out arent all that great. there is hardly any percussion. when i think of F-zero i think of that kick ass 16 bars of melody goodness. this did not have it at all.

Hazard-Productions responds:

you know, now that I think about it, you're right...
*siiigh*

[Drakkins UnderLine]

yea

this is a damn good first submission to ng. i'd turn up the leads on this tho. percussions alright. sounds are decent. bass line is there. good ideas here.

Drakkin responds:

thanks, and actually the leads were louder when I made it, but for some reason it almost seemed like when I converted it to 128kbps, for filesize purposes, the leads got put into the background for some reason.. it happened again with a smaller WIP I have when I converted it as well.. sounded fine in editing and in 193kbps

[Onyxz]

awww

its nice to see a female artist on ng. Suprisingly you have some pretty hard industrial sounds on here. im not really feelin this track tho. the percussion sounds arent that great. this doesnt flow very well from one part to the next. the melody isnt really all there. when i think of techno every track has that 16 bar lick that just makes you bounce inside. no bass line really either. better luck next time.

KittenLoveX responds:

thanks for review

[TAA--Pyro!]

its alright

i would say you need some drum fills in this track. overall its kind of weak. the reeverb is alright but ur melodies and stuff just aren't all that great. the breaks are also very boring. one thing i did like was the piano u use. the intro is good but the rest of the track didnt go anywhere.

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Personally, I was proud of my drum work, but I'll take your opinion into consideration.